Here is a photo lf my family. These are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I.

My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital far away. He goes to work by subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boy? He is my brother. He is five years older than me. He is a singer. He’s now in Beijing. He goes there by plane. I love my family.

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一个平凡的题材，一篇生动的作文。这样的命题，我们可能面对几次，甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧，了了数言，让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上，很值得我们去思考，我们能做到吗?

小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外，在结构上也有闪光之处。先总说，将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍，后分说，把家人的工作、上班方式，爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概括，起到点题的作用。我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢?

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I(汇编)

When I was very young, I was very sensible. I normally help my parents do housework, such as sweeping the floor, sweeping the floor, wiping the table, washing dishes, washing clothes, etc. Doing housework helps me get the praise from my parents, which makes me feel satisfied and fulfilled. I also got a workout and developed my hands-on skills.

I优秀范例

I just like a start,although i am so small and far,but i am bright,i am pround of myself.

My name is Sen Guo,im a middle school student,today,let me talk about myself. In my life,i am good at study,because i usually get good grades,and my teachers all like me,so i always feel so lucky and happy.And i like drawing too,although my pictures are not good,but i think OK,i believe myself .So these are my good things.Next,let me tell you my bad things,i am so short and small,also fat,my brother always laugh at me,amd i am not good for myself,because i often think i am so ugly,so i dont like to take pictures,then,i am not so brave,i afraid og my teachers,i afraid to talk in public,because i am so shy.

This is me,a bad but lovely me,so i will start correct them,i believe myself,come on!

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Today I have to get up early, wash and eat breakfast, then go to school by bike. I have four classes at noon. After class, I have lunch at school. Then I have a study class, and I have four classes in the afternoon. When I got home, I had to do my homework first, and my homework was so much that I often wrote about 23:00 at night, and then I had to go to bed. This is my boring day, there is always no time to relax, what is your school life?

今天上学，我必须早早的起床，洗漱过后吃早餐，然后骑着自行车去学校。中午我要上四节课，下课后在学校吃午餐，然后上自习课，下午也有四节课，在6:40放学。回到家，我首先要写作业，作业非常多，经常写到夜晚23:00，之后我不得不上床睡觉。这就是我无聊的一天，总是没有时间放松，你的上学生活是怎样的?

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I and my family_我和我的家人英语作文50字

There are 3 people in my family.They are my father,my mother and me.My father is a policeman.My mother is a housewife.I am a student in xxx School.My favorite subject is English,because I think it is very interesting.I like my family very much.

I 小学作文怎么写

I like reading, reading can bring me happiness, and let me learn a lot of interesting knowledge. I like to read story books best, such as journey to the west. The Monkey King in this book is clever and brave, not afraid of hard work, protecting his master, he is a responsible person. And is journey to the west one of the four great classics? Is it interesting? Do you like reading books?

我喜欢读书，读书能给我带来快乐，并且让我学到很多有趣的知识。我最喜欢看故事书，比如《西游记》，这本书里的孙悟空聪明勇敢，不怕辛苦，保护自己的师傅，是一个负责的人。并且《西游记》是四大名著之一，是不是很有趣?你喜欢看书吗?

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有人说童年是纯洁美好的，有人说童年是丰富多彩的，可我觉得童年像一罐五味糖，酸甜苦辣咸，其中，最令人回味的还是个甜字。

我五岁时候，爸爸给我买了一辆有辅助轮的自行车，哈！还是卡通版的呢!这可把我乐坏了，整天在小区里到处骑，恨不得让全世界的人都知道我有一辆自行车。我们小区里有一个很大的地下车库，爸爸每天都和我一起去停车，从地面到车库有一段坡度高的水泥路，我和爸爸都是走下去的。可是后来我发现，丫丫姐姐却直接从上面骑车冲下来了，还有一副很享受的样子，我看着看，觉得那样神气极了！我想：咦！我也能试试呀！一定倍儿爽！

于是，我拿出去玩当借口，推着我心爱的小车，来到车库口，骑上小车一，二，三，go！我一蹬，小车就像离弦的箭，一下飞了出去。我正享受着这安逸的感觉，咦？怎么回事？小车怎么不受控制了呀?一瞬间，小车就翻起了跟头。我的妈呀！救命呀！我疼得直叫唤，恰巧爸爸来找我回家吃饭，听到我的叫唤，连忙把我抱去医院。幸亏我吉人自有天相，没摔出什么大碍，可爸爸了解事情的来龙去脉后却笑得合不拢嘴，当时我还觉得大人真奇怪，总喜欢幸灾乐祸，现在想起，自己都会捧腹大笑!!!

童年是美好的，是纯洁的，是珍贵的。让我们一起珍惜这独一无二的童年吧!

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