相信大家都写过作文吧，写作文可以让我们即使不说话也能表达自己的想法。很多人在看到作文题目时不知道该怎么写，一篇好作文能够让阅读之人感受作者当时的心情。那么一篇优秀的作文究竟该怎么写呢？为此，小编从网络上为大家精心整理了《I》，欢迎您阅读和收藏，并分享给身边的朋友！

Here is a photo lf my family. These are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I.

My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital far away. He goes to work by subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boy? He is my brother. He is five years older than me. He is a singer. He’s now in Beijing. He goes there by plane. I love my family.

【要领点评】

一个平凡的题材，一篇生动的作文。这样的命题，我们可能面对几次，甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧，了了数言，让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上，很值得我们去思考，我们能做到吗?

小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外，在结构上也有闪光之处。先总说，将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍，后分说，把家人的工作、上班方式，爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概括，起到点题的作用。我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢?

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I(汇编)

When I was very young, I was very sensible. I normally help my parents do housework, such as sweeping the floor, sweeping the floor, wiping the table, washing dishes, washing clothes, etc. Doing housework helps me get the praise from my parents, which makes me feel satisfied and fulfilled. I also got a workout and developed my hands-on skills.

I优秀范例

I just like a start,although i am so small and far,but i am bright,i am pround of myself.

My name is Sen Guo,im a middle school student,today,let me talk about myself. In my life,i am good at study,because i usually get good grades,and my teachers all like me,so i always feel so lucky and happy.And i like drawing too,although my pictures are not good,but i think OK,i believe myself .So these are my good things.Next,let me tell you my bad things,i am so short and small,also fat,my brother always laugh at me,amd i am not good for myself,because i often think i am so ugly,so i dont like to take pictures,then,i am not so brave,i afraid og my teachers,i afraid to talk in public,because i am so shy.

This is me,a bad but lovely me,so i will start correct them,i believe myself,come on!

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