相信无论是学习还是工作中，我们都接触过作文，通过写作文我们可以防止忘记重要的事情。很多人都认为作文非常难写，一篇优秀的作文具有很强的感染力。怎么写出一片优秀的作文呢？为了让您在使用时更加简单方便，下面是小编整理的“I优秀范例”，欢迎您参考，希望对您有所助益！

I just like a start,although i am so small and far,but i am bright,i am pround of myself.

My name is Sen Guo,im a middle school student,today,let me talk about myself. In my life,i am good at study,because i usually get good grades,and my teachers all like me,so i always feel so lucky and happy.And i like drawing too,although my pictures are not good,but i think OK,i believe myself .So these are my good things.Next,let me tell you my bad things,i am so short and small,also fat,my brother always laugh at me,amd i am not good for myself,because i often think i am so ugly,so i dont like to take pictures,then,i am not so brave,i afraid og my teachers,i afraid to talk in public,because i am so shy.

This is me,a bad but lovely me,so i will start correct them,i believe myself,come on!

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Here is a photo lf my family. These are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I.

My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital far away. He goes to work by subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boy? He is my brother. He is five years older than me. He is a singer. He’s now in Beijing. He goes there by plane. I love my family.

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一个平凡的题材，一篇生动的作文。这样的命题，我们可能面对几次，甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧，了了数言，让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上，很值得我们去思考，我们能做到吗?

小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外，在结构上也有闪光之处。先总说，将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍，后分说，把家人的工作、上班方式，爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概括，起到点题的作用。我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢?

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一大清早，我就从帐篷里钻出来，和林然，范鸿欣一起吃了早饭，收拾行囊，到车站等车。

我们在大屿山露营，今天我们要去迪士尼玩。这里离迪士尼非常近，搭半小时的公交到东冲，在东冲坐一个站的地铁到欣澳，再从欣澳转迪士尼线到迪士尼，从露营地到迪士尼大约只要35分钟。

迪士尼线的地铁十分有特色，地铁快到欣澳了，对面的迪士尼地铁映入眼帘。（这张是到迪士尼站时拍的）

我急忙地冲进去，想看看里面是什么样的，这个地铁实在是太棒了！你看，把手都是米奇的轮廓哦。车头有两个列车员，我不敢在车头拍照，于是到了第三节车厢，但是车子开得太快了，不一会就拍成幻影图像了。

地铁到站了，我兴致勃勃地踏出第一步，迪士尼站太漂亮了，有点英伦风格,站台的柱子很有特色。

迪士尼线，我太喜欢你了！走咯，去乐园里吧。

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When I was very young, I was very sensible. I normally help my parents do housework, such as sweeping the floor, sweeping the floor, wiping the table, washing dishes, washing clothes, etc. Doing housework helps me get the praise from my parents, which makes me feel satisfied and fulfilled. I also got a workout and developed my hands-on skills.

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Today I have to get up early, wash and eat breakfast, then go to school by bike. I have four classes at noon. After class, I have lunch at school. Then I have a study class, and I have four classes in the afternoon. When I got home, I had to do my homework first, and my homework was so much that I often wrote about 23:00 at night, and then I had to go to bed. This is my boring day, there is always no time to relax, what is your school life?

今天上学，我必须早早的起床，洗漱过后吃早餐，然后骑着自行车去学校。中午我要上四节课，下课后在学校吃午餐，然后上自习课，下午也有四节课，在6:40放学。回到家，我首先要写作业，作业非常多，经常写到夜晚23:00，之后我不得不上床睡觉。这就是我无聊的一天，总是没有时间放松，你的上学生活是怎样的?

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